(Ceci's Song)
My footsteps fall into the lonely night.
The tears dance in the corners of my eyes.
The stars wink their goodbyes as clouds appear.
To remind me of a love that was so clear.
She said "Listen baby, try to understand.
"I fell in love with more than just one man."
She said, "Listen baby, dont be sad or blue.
"'Cause half of my heart still belongs to you."
Oh, I can touch the darkness with my hand.
She fell in love with more than just one man.
Oh like the sunlight stolen by the moon.
Love can be so false and yet so true.
My lonely footsteps fall into the night.
The tears are waving in my eyes goodbye.
The clouds are lifting and the stars appear.
Oh, how love can be so far and yet so near.
She said, "Listen baby all my love is true.
"But half my heart belongs to each of you."
She said, "Listen baby, don't be sad or blue.
"'Cause in my heart there's room enough for two."
1 comment:
YEY! my song, LOVE it.
But i must say few lines need to be edited.
"to remind me of a love that was so clear" i would change (was) to (is) present and i can tell you is not as clear as mud, but as clear as water.
"i fell in love with more than just one man" Nope should be " i never fell in love with any other man" and its true, liked them maybe, not in love for sure.
"Cause half of my heart still belongs to you" wrong again, "cause all my heart belongs to you"
half would be a broken heart.
"She fell in love with more than just one man" nope "she fell in love with one of a kind man" there are no others like you.
"but half my heart belongs to each of you" nope "because all my heart belongs to only you"
"cause in my heart there's enough for two" Ooops! nope "cause in my heart there is NO room for two"
Now the next step will be to make me a CD, you have granted my Bday wish, which was to write me a song now you have to put it on a CD. thank you.
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